In Room 11 we had to write the first 5 words that come to our mid when we look at an image of a cow waiting for a bus on a padlet on our class blog. After that we had to choose someone else's 5 word's and you had to turn their word's into a story of our own.
100 word challenge
Once there was a cow that was standing down by the bus stop on the concrete footpath down by the asphalt road. The cow was really really tired waiting because he lived around a remote valley of mountains and streams it was a green land in Iceland ironically named Iceland with some of the greenest grass in the world. The cow was sad because in that particular bus stop there is no time slot for when a bus comes, Little did the cow know that the next bus wouldn’t come till next year sadly that’s the end.
Once there was a cow that was standing down by the bus stop on the concrete footpath down by the asphalt road. The cow was really really tired waiting because he lived around a remote valley of mountains and streams it was a green land in Iceland ironically named Iceland with some of the greenest grass in the world. The cow was sad because in that particular bus stop there is no time slot for when a bus comes, Little did the cow know that the next bus wouldn’t come till next year sadly that’s the end.
Awesome story Patrone! I love the vocabulary you've used, like remote and ironically. This reminds me of the time I missed the last train home in England and my dad had to wake up to come and pick me up! Next time make sure you check the sentences in your introduction. Keep up the great work!
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